I have just watched 'Persuasion' which I recorded; if you had cut anymore out of the original the whole storyline would have disappeared. As it is you have characters saying! We did not think to see you again so soon' when in your version she had not seen him before anyway.
The whole of Ann's arrival in Bath disappeared altogether! I gave up then in frustrations!
You have been advertising this for weeks, you would have been better employed using some of that time to show the whole of the novel.
As for the versions of Mansfield Park and Northanger Abbey I am astonished that they still exist they are so old.
Monday 21 December 2015 8:07PM
I have just watched 'Persuasion' which I recorded; if you had cut anymore out of the original the whole storyline would have disappeared. As it is you have characters saying! We did not think to see you again so soon' when in your version she had not seen him before anyway.
The whole of Ann's arrival in Bath disappeared altogether! I gave up then in frustrations!
You have been advertising this for weeks, you would have been better employed using some of that time to show the whole of the novel.
As for the versions of Mansfield Park and Northanger Abbey I am astonished that they still exist they are so old.